Tuesday, 31 May 2016

Freedom.

  One stormy night

Alexia was watching T.V. and then Troy came in and started watching T.V. and then Freedom.                                                                         
Troy went to sleep in Alexia's room and went to sleep on the machres.Freedom always wanted to Sleep with Troy and troy wood put
Freedom on Alexia but fredem wood get
Off and will go back on Troys bed.

In the morning Alexia felt sad then…
Alexia ferg out an idea so Alexia put A flafy blkit on then on that nitgh It works so for years and years it Works.            
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6 comments:

  1. Anonymous31 May 2016 at 18:25

    You are getting the hang of how to structure a narrative. Well done. Please just add in a little bit of detail about Freedom. Who is Freedom?

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  2. Anonymous31 May 2016 at 18:26

    You are getting the hang of how to structure a narrative. Well done. Please just add in a little bit of detail about Freedom. Who is Freedom?

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  3. Anonymous1 June 2016 at 12:09

    cool tuch alexia

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  4. Anonymous3 June 2016 at 13:37

    best narrative ever great work alexia

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  5. Anonymous1 September 2016 at 11:46

    AWESOME ALEXIA, I enjoyed your story, but one tip is to add in more detail like who is Freedom. THANKS AND KA PAI:)

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  6. Anonymous23 August 2017 at 09:48

    freedom is my cat

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